Talk:Emma Nāwahī/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Catrìona (talk · contribs) 23:55, 19 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

OK, I'll be picking this one up. Please reply individually under each of my posts and mark with Done, Fixed, Added, Not done, Doing..., or Removed, followed by any comment you'd like to make. Catrìona (talk) 18:58, 18 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

This looks like another quick pass, AGF'ing on offline sources. I made a few prose edits, and the only suggestion I have at this point is:

bail was set at 10,000 dollars — might be worth adding a conversion for 21st century readers.

@Catrìona: I don't know the conversion rate and do not know if that was Hawaiian dollars or US dollars. KAVEBEAR (talk) 04:05, 22 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed