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GA Review

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Reviewer: Paparazzzi (talk · contribs) 21:15, 17 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Expect a review soon. --Paparazzzi (talk) 21:15, 17 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Lead and infobox

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  • I believe the pop genre is redundant when it is also stated that it is an electropop song
  • The lead can be extended, detailing what critics said about the song
  • Apparently this song was performed live. Please add information about the track's live performances

Background

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  • new favorite song on her upcoming third major-label studio album was "Evil Twin".[1] The next day, she described the song... change the last "song" with "track"
  • " adding that it is about all those things people think about to themselves and that "everyone's got an evil twin in them"." this read awkward, please reword it

More to come.--Paparazzzi (talk) 22:08, 17 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

  • I feel the following sentence should be included on the composition section instead, since it does not disclose anything about the song's development: "The next day, she described the song in an interview with Entertainment Tonight by saying "why did I say that? That is my evil twin, that wasn't me! I am innocent!", adding that it is about all those things people think about to themselves and that "everyone's got an evil twin in them"."

Composition

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  • Mention the length of the track and its genre at the beginning of the second paragraph
    • The first sentence already mentions "electronic pop", so I think this would be redundant. Also, I don't normally see track lengths in song articles. If required to pass your GA review, fine, but seems unnecessary when mentioned in infobox. ---Another Believer (Talk) 15:56, 18 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • The first paragraph should be moved to the Background section, since it is information about the development of the track

Critical reception

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References

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  • Copyvio: Violation Unlikely with 33.3% confidence  Everything fine here
  • Ref 3, Background section: "to January 25, 2019, because she wanted to add more songs to it, and removed it from iTunes that month"... The info in bold does not appear on the source. Also, I think it would be important to clarify in that sentence that the album was eventually not released on January 25.
  • Background: Ref 4 could be removed and instead you could use ref 6 to support the sentence ""You've waited long enough.. #EVILTWIN comes out Friday 😎 listen for my entire family on the backgrounds!"
  • Background: "Thus, it was one of the few songs from the original version of Treat Myself to make the final cut." This is not supported by ref 9.
  • In Ref. 18 the song is described as a "disco-influenced pop bop"... I think the "disco" part could be included in the composition section, as something like, ""Evil Twin" is an electropop song with elements of disco music" or something like that
  • Is Soundigest reliable? it looks like a blog

Overall

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  • I have attempted to address all the issues with the infobox, lead and background sections. Let me know if there are any more issues with those. I will let AB get to the other sections since he pretty much wrote those alone. Regards, NØ 09:54, 18 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    I think all concerns have been addressed. Looking pretty good to me overall, but ready for Paparazzzi's review. Thanks, both! ---Another Believer (Talk) 15:54, 18 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Since my comments have been addressed, I'm going to pass this article. Congratulations! Paparazzzi (talk) 17:52, 18 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.