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Reviewer: ..:CK:.. (talk2me) 21:39, 30 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

In my opinion i now believe this article passes, great work =) ..:CK:.. (talk2me) 05:18, 14 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Starting the review. ..:CK:.. (talk2me) 21:39, 30 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
*Composition Section, should be renamed to Music and Lyrics since you are heavily discussing the lyrics, more so than the composition:

  • Link number 7 should not be linked, see 4 Minutes. Done
  • He continued by identifying the most country part of the song a lyric whci referenced a "one horse town". There are spelling mistakes, the sentence doesnt flow or sound correct, needs to be re-written.
  •  Done Not done, "He identified the most country part" is not grammatically correct. I would suggest removing sentence all together or replacing.
  • Craig Shelburne of CMT News said "Fearless" was about a great firs date. I think you mean First, not firs. Done
  • In an different perspective, Rob Sheffield of Blender magazine said noted the lyrics[...]. Should be written as "In a different perspective, Rob Sheffield of Blender magazine said the lyrics[...]  Done
  • Could you add an audio sample to the composition section? Done
  • Link six title says " "aylor Swift: Fearless". Your forgot the T in Taylor Done

This is what i've noticed right off the bat, once these are fixed i will go through more thoroughly. ..:CK:.. (talk2me) 21:39, 30 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Alright going through more :

  • Please remove all acharts, replace with billboard, or other. ..:CK:.. (talk2me) 21:08, 7 June 2010 (UTC) Done[reply]
  • "Swift conceived while touring as opening act in order to promote her eponymous debut album, Taylor Swift (2006)." Okay, this sentence needs rewritten, im not sure what your trying to say. It sounds like she gave birth lol.  Done
  • Im aware of what conceived means, thanks for the little sex ed lesson though :P. But what im saying is the sentence, "Swift conceived while touring as opening act in order to promote her eponymous debut album, Taylor Swift (2006)." is a dead end sentence. It makes no sence. What did she conceive?
  • "At the time, she was not dating anyone or "even in the beginning stages of dating anybody." There needs to be a citation right after this sentence, all quotes need a cite right after the ending quote.  Done
  • Please add a certification section, i know theres only one but it still needs to have a section.

Other User Comments
I dont have time to conduct the review but i would say:

  • is there enough evidence to put pop rock as a genre in the infobox?
  • if you upload an audio sample that would be good.
  • could do with a release history. i might be wrong but i think it was first released a promo single to iTunes. At the very least its uk/european/American release will certainly have different dates.

Regards, Lil-unique1 (talk) 22:08, 30 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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