Talk:Fiery serpents

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I have edited what I can but this article needs to be re-written.--Soulparadox 19:11, 21 May 2012 (UTC)

This editing is beyond my skill. It needs Admin medicine. It is extremely confusing and appears to be a direct translation. I'll try back at it in the future, but not sure what else I can do. DaltonCastle (talk) 09:01, 3 August 2012 (UTC)

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  • This article (for a variety of reasons) needs a massive re-write. I don't feel comfortable just doing a trans-wiki on needs a look-over from the ground up. --Bddmagic (talk) 01:26, 16 January 2013 (UTC)