Talk:Fort Phantom Hill/GA1

GA Review

Passed. Hog Farm _Talk 15:23, 6 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 18:52, 5 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I have Cutrer's bio of Ben McCulloch and will check to see if it has anything useful. Hog Farm _Talk 18:52, 5 March 2023 (UTC) }}[reply]

I believe the article lede section might be a bit too in depth, but I'm relatively new to this process so I'm not sure if this is something I should make recommendations for improvement here, or if I should take that to the article talk page. Everything else seems good with the article. Thank you! Kcmastrpc (talk) 20:15, 5 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Nothing in Cutrer's Ben McCulloch and the Frontier Military Tradition or in Colton's The Civil War in the Western Territories.

"Fort McKavett was established during the American colonization of Texas" - the reference to Fort McKavett seems to be a relic from the copying within from that article
- I cannot believe I didn't catch this. –♠Vamí _IV†♠ 04:47, 6 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
"In 1849, gold was discovered in California" - hadn't the Gold Rush already started in 1848 after they found gold at Sutter's Mill?
- Corrected. –♠Vamí _IV†♠ 04:47, 6 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
"which the garrison could abate even by digging an 80-foot (24 m) well" - context suggests you might have intended "could not abate"?
- Another embarassing slip up. –♠Vamí _IV†♠ 04:47, 6 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
"along with Forts Mason and Terrell." - any chance you mean Fort Terrett?
- Yes; corrected. –♠Vamí _IV†♠ 04:47, 6 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Image licensing is fine
As per the new GA reviewing expectations, I spot-checked a few sources. No copyright or source-text integrity issues noted
All sources are reliable

Only very minor issues here; placing on hold. Hog Farm _Talk 23:05, 5 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you so much for your quick review! –♠Vamí _IV†♠ 04:47, 6 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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