Talk:Gento (song)/Archive 1
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Did you know nomination
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 21:07, 30 July 2023 (UTC)
... that SB19, a Filipino boy band, is the first reported Filipino band to chart on Billboard's World Digital Song Sales chart with "Gento"? Source: McIntyre, Hugh (June 1, 2023). "SB19 charts their first Billboard sales hit with 'Gento'". Forbes. "SB19 becomes likely the first Filipino band to reach the World Digital Song Sales chart with 'Gento.'"ALT1: ... that Filipino boy band SB19 is considered the first Filipino band to chart on Billboard's World Digital Song Sales chart with "Gento"?ALT2: ... that Filipino boy band SB19 became the first reported Filipino band to chart on Billboard's World Digital Song Sales chart with "Gento"?
Apologies for the inconsistencies. I found another source that could replace the one I used prior that I think could work better and hopefully lessen the risk of the hook being contested. I wish the previous hooks to be scraped and opt for the one below.
- ALT3: ... that SB19 is the first Filipino group to chart on Billboard's World Digital Song Sales chart with "Gento"? Source: TV Patrol Weekend Playback – June 4, 2023 (Television production) (in Tagalog). ABS-CBN Broadcasting Center: ABS-CBN News. June 4, 2023. Event occurs at 34:42. Retrieved June 28, 2023 – via YouTube. "Patuloy ang success ng grupo, lalo na't sila ang kauna-unang P-pop group na pumasok sa Billboard World Digital Song Sales chart ngayong linggo." [Their success continues, as they are the first P-pop group to enter Billboard's World Digital Song Sales chart this week.]
Moved to mainspace by Abacusada (talk). Self-nominated at 08:10, 27 June 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Gento (song); consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
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Overall: @Abacusada: Good article. The other hooks could work as a possible alternate though. Onegreatjoke (talk) 19:36, 29 June 2023 (UTC)
- Thanks a lot for your review, Onegreatjoke! I thought "likely the first" from the first source might draw troubles for this nomination, so I offered another alternative. Glad to know that it would work anyway. – Abacusada (t • c) 12:28, 30 June 2023 (UTC)
GA Review
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- This review is transcluded from Talk:Gento (song)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 15:40, 30 July 2023 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a. (reference section):
- b. (citations to reliable sources):
- c. (OR):
- d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a. (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a. (major aspects):
- b. (focused):
- a. (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
- b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/fail:
- Pass/fail:
(Criteria marked are unassessed)
I will handle this as my first review for the GAN backlog! --K. Peake 15:40, 30 July 2023 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
- Replace hlist with bullet points per Template:Infobox song
Partly done by Vaughan J. – see below.
- Came to fix the infobox only for this review. I'm leaving all the other stuff for the nominator to do. I changed all the hlists, except the language parameter, as it shows dot points. — VAUGHAN J. (TALK) 06:21, 31 July 2023 (UTC)
- Should EDM really be listed under genres in the infobox when it is only the breaks?
Removed by Vaughan J.
- Pipe John Paulo Nase to Pablo (musician)
Done
- Mention in the first sentence that it was recorded for their second extended play, Pagtatag!
Partly done
- Opted for "..., taken from their second extended play (EP), Pagtatag! (2023)." instead.
- Swap the release and writing/production sentences around
Done
- "as the lead single from..." → "as the lead single from the album"
Done
- I replaced "album" to "EP" instead.
- The trials part does not appear to be sourced
Done
- Removed
- "lyricism and SB19's vocals and versatility." → "lyricism, SB19's vocals, and the versatility."
Done
- "peaking at number" → "peaking at numbers"
Done
Background and release
- Should the tour be introduced as their second concert tour or first worldwide tour per the source?
Done
- I introduced it as the first world tour instead.
- "revealed that the boy band" → "revealed that SB19"
Done
- "It marks the boy band's" → "It marked the boy band's"
Done
- Remove commas around Pagisbol
Done
- "The boy band announced that the EP" → "SB19 announced that Pagtatag!"
Done
- "although they didn't reveal" → "although they did not reveal"
Done
- "and was made available for" → "and it was made available for"
Done
Composition and lyrics
- "which featured strong" → "which features strong"
Done
- "by himself while he" → "by himself, while he"
Done
- "Servida had worked with" → "Servida had previously worked with" and remove the first ep introduction
Done
- "others describe the song as" → "others described the song as"
Done
- "The song featured clapping sounds" → "The song features clapping sounds"
Done
- "It included a message about" → "It includes a message about"
Done
- "which was utilized along with" → "which is utilized along with"
Done
Reception
- "is described as" → "was described as"
Done
- "it did not affect the song's message," → "it did not affect the message,"
Done
- "the song highlights the boy band's" → "the song highlights SB19's"
Done
- Pipe music charts to Billboard charts
Done
Promotion
- Img looks good!
- Mention the quarry is large per the source
Done
- "after its release." → "after being released."
Done
- "John Legaspi of" → "John Legaspi of the" but where is "bop" sourced?
Done
- His comment was mentioned in the second paragraph: "Now with over four million views, the song clip, which is a total bop ..." Although I may have possibly taken it out of context.
- Add a comma after Wish 107.5 Bus
Done
- "The boy band embarked on" → "They embarked on"
Done
Controversy
- "the music industry? It's" → "the music industry? [...] It's" per the source
Done
- "the boy band was criticized online" → "SB19 was criticized online"
Done
Credits and personnel
- Use
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so there is the right space between credits and personnelDone
- Pipe John Paulo Nase to Pablo (musician)
Done
Charts
- Good
References
- Copyvio score looks great at 25%!!
- Remove or replace ref 20 per WP:FORBES
Done
Final comments and verdict
On hold until all of the issues are fixed; this should be done soon! --K. Peake 20:27, 30 July 2023 (UTC)
- Thank you for allotting time for my first GAN! I'll make sure to address everything right away. – Abacusada (t • c) 06:35, 31 July 2023 (UTC)
- @Kyle Peake: Thank you for your valuable comments! I have addressed all of them. Let me know if there is anything else to be carried out. Thanks! – Abacusada (t • c) 09:47, 31 July 2023 (UTC)
- ✓ Pass now, briefly copy edited but this is now good to go! --K. Peake 09:25, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
- Thanks a lot for your help! – Abacusada (t • c) 11:59, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
- ✓ Pass now, briefly copy edited but this is now good to go! --K. Peake 09:25, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
- @Kyle Peake: Thank you for your valuable comments! I have addressed all of them. Let me know if there is anything else to be carried out. Thanks! – Abacusada (t • c) 09:47, 31 July 2023 (UTC)
- Thank you for allotting time for my first GAN! I'll make sure to address everything right away. – Abacusada (t • c) 06:35, 31 July 2023 (UTC)