"They were supplied with between 1,080 and 1,500 rounds of ammunition" - This begs the question "why the range?"
Presumably changes over the course of her career - perhaps peacetime versus wartime loadouts.
"and four of 7-cylinder"
when were the original He 60 floatplanes replaced?
I haven't seen anything specific (and in fact, the only mention of even a general timeframe is in Whitley, who simply says "by the outbreak of war." The Ar 196 was introduced into service in November 1938, so apparently sometime between then and September 1939.
if her tubes were amidships, how it is the aft ones were removed? A bit confusing.
Well, there are four triple launchers, two on each side of the ship - the pair located further aft were the ones removed. You can see the arrangement in the USN drawing - the tubes almost directly below the aircraft catapult were the ones removed.
"her... floatplane" suggest "one of her... floatplanes"
did the final AAA plan get implemented?
No, and I guess I forgot to make that clear when I wrote it. Fixed now.
Torpedo, Arado Ar 196 and Trondheim are overlinked.
suggest you add the location field to the journal sources
should Blitz be redlinked? What type of ships was she?
After doing a bit of digging, it turns out it was the former Imperial-era torpedo boat SMS V185, which was retained after Versailles and converted into a remote-control vessel (presumably for experimental purposes).
suggestion only: 13 digit ISBNs
My understanding (or at least what I have been told in the past at FAC) is that books that predate the 13-digit number should keep their original ISBNs, since they can be found by the 10-digit numbers just as easily.
ISBN for Warship
Warship is a journal, not a book, so it doesn't have an ISBN. Best I can do is add the oclc number.
Review completed, on hold for seven days for the above points to be addressed. Regards, Peacemaker67 (send... over) 03:28, 25 August 2013 (UTC)
Thanks for reviewing the article, Peacemaker, it's been very helpful. Parsecboy (talk) 18:28, 29 August 2013 (UTC)