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Reviewer: Starsandwhales (talk · contribs) 15:16, 10 January 2020 (UTC)
Hello, I will be reviewing this article. If there's anything that I need to comment on, it's at the end of the review. starsandwhales (talk) 15:16, 10 January 2020 (UTC)
- Many thanks for taking this on. Chiswick Chap (talk) 15:27, 10 January 2020 (UTC)
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- I know it isn't necessary, but if you can, alt text on the images would be helpful.
- Added.
- The word "altruism" should be linked the first time it shows up in the article (after the lead), and not towards the end. Same with the word "evolution".
- Linked, and removed links further down
- There should be a link for "allele"
- Added.
- The caption on the image of the temple should be a bit more clear, since I didn't fully understand how the image was connected to the content of the article.
- The text and caption explain how the interplay of genes and culture allow humanity to develop elaborate artefacts (like temples). I chose this image because it shows both lots of people (as statues) and a complex product of human culture.
- This article is very engaging. I think it sticks to the scope and summarizes the concepts with their own articles very well.
- Thank you very much!
- There's no link or ISBN for "Animal Dispersion in Relation to Social Behaviour. Edinburgh: Oliver & Boyd.". Is there a copy of this on Google Books?
- I've added the OCLC, there weren't ISBNs in 1962, and there's no Google ebook either.
- I'm a bit confused by the scienceblogs.com source. Is the author a notable person? If not, why is someone's blog being used to cite? Especially since that statement already has a second citation.
- David Sloan Wilson is a very well-known biologist. Scienceblogs.com isn't a personal blog but a place where scientists can write about major issues in science.
- Oh ok, thanks for clarifying.
- David Sloan Wilson is a very well-known biologist. Scienceblogs.com isn't a personal blog but a place where scientists can write about major issues in science.
- There are some duplinks in the citations with the authors' names.
- Removed some duplicate authorlinks.
Everything looks good! This was a really interesting article, and I learned quite a bit. starsandwhales (talk) 17:31, 10 January 2020 (UTC)