Talk:H.A.T.E.U./GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 00:39, 3 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:39, 3 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

When you're ready. — Calvin999 11:04, 9 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

No DABs.
External links good.
The background section doesn't really cover the background, but rather the performance. Is there any info on the origin of the song or why she decided to do it?
- I've re-titled it as Production. — Calvin999 19:04, 10 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Copyright 2009 Rye Songs which is administered by Songs of Universal (BMI)/WB Music Publishing (ASCAP/Songs of Peer/March 9 Publishing (ASCAP). Why is this here?
- We tend to include management and publishing info now. — Calvin999 19:04, 10 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  - Really? No such info in your recent GA for Infinity.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:38, 11 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]
    - That isn't now. I can remove it if you want. But I've noticed that other editors are including it now. — Calvin999 21:07, 11 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]
albums initial release Missing possessive apostrophe.
- Added. — Calvin999 19:04, 10 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  - and here: the albums third single and there are later examples as well.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:38, 11 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]
A low quality snippet Add a hyphen between low and quality. More later.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:01, 10 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- Added. — Calvin999 19:04, 10 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Was it released or did it chart outside the US? If so, add that info.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:38, 11 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- It wasn't and didn't, else I would have added that info. — Calvin999 10:08, 13 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Any chance of this progressing please? — Calvin999 21:30, 17 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Non-reviewer comments

"described the song as 'notable'" isn't really informative. I'd mention that Fekadu called the song as "a beautiful heartbreak ballad"
"was critical of Carey's vocal performance" → "criticized Carey's vocals"
It could help to add some critical commentary on the performances as the "live performances" section is quite short
- There isn't any. I couldn't even source other Live performances. It was a very minimal promoted, charted and commented on single. — Calvin999
Not really sure a "charts" section is really warranted with only one entry, but is definitely worth discussing in prose within the "Release and remixes" section either way.
- I opted for a table over prose. — Calvin999 19:19, 18 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Left this on behalf of review's request. Snuggums (talk / edits) 00:15, 18 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]