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Good articleHMS Repulse (1892) has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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April 24, 2016Good article nomineeListed
August 23, 2020Good topic candidatePromoted
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 17:57, 24 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]


I'll do this now. JAGUAR  17:57, 24 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Initial comments

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  • The lead could be expanded a sentence or two. For instance it mentions nothing on it being a flagship
  • "She participated in annual maneuvers in the Irish Sea" - manoeuvres
  • " The following month, Repulse took part in the annual maneuvers" - manoeuvres
  • "In July and August, when the annual maneuvers were held in the Atlantic" - manoeuvres
  • "In August 1900, she again was involved in annual maneuvers in the Atlantic" - manoeuvres
  • "and the ship took part in Reserve Fleet maneuvers in July" - manoeuvres
  • "on 3 January 1905 for service in reserve with a nucleus crew" - is this the same as a skeleton crew?
    • Kind of, but not exactly. Aside from a few junior ratings for the heavy lifting of daily maintenance, I'd suspect that the crew was quite a bit more senior than usual as their function was to train the reservists.
  • "The refit complete, Repulse recommissioned at Chatham" - how about With the refit completed?
    • Indeed.
  • No dead links

Manoeuvres ;-D. Sorry, at least it gave me a reason to make more comments! The lead could do with a very slight expansion, and once they're all addressed then this can pass. JAGUAR  18:07, 24 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Sad thing is that I remember thinking that I needed to check the spelling of the rest of them before I could consider it done, but later totally forgot about it. Thanks for taking this one so quickly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:45, 24 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]
With all of the issues clarified, this should be good to go. Usually I wouldn't mind the different spellings, but it gives me an excuse to list more comments! JAGUAR  21:04, 24 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]