Talk:HMS Shalimar

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:HMS Shalimar/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 03:39, 3 June 2020 (UTC)

Criteria

1. Prose  On hold

2. Verifiability  On hold

3. Depth of Coverage ✓ Pass

4. Neutral ✓ Pass

5. Stable ✓ Pass

6. Illustrations ✓ Pass

7. Miscellaneous ✓ Pass

Comments

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• Consider linking minesweeper
• Be consistent with Strait of Malacca and Malacca Strait; unless I'm an idiot and they're different bodies of water, the name used should be consistent. You also use Straits of Malacca
• "then sank a coaster two day later" --> "then sank a coaster two days later"

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• The final paragraph of the article is completely uncited.

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Good work, placing on hold. Hog Farm (talk) 23:19, 3 June 2020 (UTC)

• Done all. Will be doing your review soon. L293D (☎ • ✎) 02:54, 4 June 2020 (UTC)