Talk:HMS Stag (1812)

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 20:39, 17 October 2023 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:39, 17 October 2023 (UTC)

@Sturmvogel 66: Hi, just a ping in case this has passed you by. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 18:18, 2 November 2023 (UTC)

Sorry for the delay. Without further ado:

• Images properly licensed
• link carronade in the infobox

• Carronade is linked at first mention in the infobox

• consider changing "After having undergone a refit" to "Having been refitted"

• Done

• Was all of the activity in the last two paragraphs in 1815?

• Added an extra date to clarify that no, that's all 1814

That's fine, I think that I was just expecting a strict chronological account.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:13, 13 November 2023 (UTC)

• Transplanted? Perhaps "transferred" instead?

• Done

• Nicely done

• @Sturmvogel 66: Thank you! Have replied above. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 17:29, 13 November 2023 (UTC)