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GOCE review

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This is a really solid article, and it's very clear a lot of hard work has already gone into it. It's very thorough, very well researched and referenced, and checks off all the major boxes of a good article. I have a few comments:

  • The archived link and original link are both dead for this quote: "The new stuff we've been writing will far surpass [the self-titled]." Perhaps try another date from the archives? Also, there could be something I am missing, but I also didn't see a reason to replace the album title with "[the self-titled]". Quotes should only be changed is there is real necessity. Is there something I'm missing?
  • I would suggest you split out tour information into its own section. As it stands now, it tends to chop up the Release section, and actually touring schedules are different from release information. Many good/FA articles split tour information out into its own section.

I've completed my copyedit. Let me know if you think there are any errors.--Esprit15d • talkcontribs 19:08, 11 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]