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GA Reassessment

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Yet another Carbrera article on a shopping mall in Minnesota.

  • Intro is full of list cruft. Most of the stores mentioned in the intro are not mentioned elsewhere and do not seem notable on their own.
  • One article source is Cinema Treasures, which is a user submitted directory. Another is a blogspot page. Neither is a RS.
  • The Explore Minnesota link is 404 and seems to be a directory listing that has no relevance anyway.
  • "it features massively wide hallways" - cite this quote
  • Way too monotone in sentence structure. Everything is "In X, Y happened. In Z, A happened."
  • The entire article is only one section. Surely there is more to say about the changes in stores and renovations? Look at how much material I got out of Swifton Center, and that mall died in the 80s.

tl;dr there's a lot to work on here. As @Carbrera: seemed to ignore the last GAN, I think this one is bound for delisting. Ten Pound Hammer(What did I screw up now?) 01:03, 7 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]