Talk:Harvey Milk/Archive 4
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REQUEST FOR COMMENT: Milk's involvement with Jim Jones/Peoples Temple
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Does the content in the "Peoples Temple" section violate WP:UNDUE and WP:BIO and is the materially covered sufficiently in the career section above? Please see RFC: Suggestions for responding to understand the RFC process.
*Comment. RFC notice placed on the talk pages of the related wikiprojects. Banjeboi 04:13, 7 June 2008 (UTC)
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Removed People's temple section
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The above section was removed as there wasn't consensus to keep it, likewise the Sipple content will also be brought to talkpage so we can sort out what, if any of it merits inclusion. Banjeboi 12:08, 2 August 2008 (UTC) The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Peoples Temple - Please Don't Delete Entire NPOV Sourced Sections with No Consensus To Do So
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Especially given that you were actually the user to have issued a "dispute" tag (and Rfc) on the section, and then no consensus to delete the section emerged. Under such circumstances, wholesale deleting every single word of the entire section was not comporting with Wikipedia editing standards, to put it in the kindest light. Mosedschurte (talk) 14:02, 2 August 2008 (UTC) I agree with this writer. Please do not delete. It is true there is no consensus to delete the section emerged.—Preceding unsigned comment added by Caramia3403 (talk • contribs)
Benjiboi: Please stop vandalizing the Milk page. Do not delete wholesale entire sections of NPOV sourced material. Not only did your Request for Comment to delete reach no consensus (in fact, it was closer to the opposite), but this is not how WP:Requests_for_comment work on Wikipedia. Mosedschurte (talk) 21:18, 2 August 2008 (UTC)
Outdent Mosedschurte, you've been edit-warring to include this content for two months now and seeming no one has been swayed to include much more than what is there excluding this section altogether. SPAs don't help here, so we have several editors who feels this violates WP:UNDUE amongst other policies. Note I haven't said that this information is false or doesn't belong on wikipedia at all. I do think more MPOV sources would help here but no evidence has emerged that this was a big deal in Milk's life ergo is shouldn't be given undue weight on his biography. Likewise, in the article on People's Temple I would expect to see a mention that supported each other but it should also be presented NPOV. For instance, Jones supported both candidates in Milk's campaign. This would suggest that Milk had less of a "special" level of support and was simply getting political favors from jones who was a mover and shaker. Banjeboi 05:36, 3 August 2008 (UTC)
In addition, your statement that "seeming no one has been swayed to include much more than what is there excluding this section altogether" is inaccurate, to remain civil about it. After issuing your Rfc, you received the following comments: "I've reviewed the Milk page, the Moscone page, and have worked on the various Jones pages. I disagree that this is being given undue weight. His involvement with, and defense of, Peoples Temple, during and just after their time in California, is relevant." Wildhartlivie (talk) 11:09, 14 June 2008 (UTC) "I agree with this writer. Please do not delete. It is true there is no consensus to delete the section emerged." —Preceding unsigned comment added by Caramia3403 (talk • contribs) "Given the context and timing, the Peoples Temple section is far too important in this article to delete or merge. Especially the letter cited in the article attacking people calling for an investigation." —Preceding unsigned comment added by 216.23.197.82 (talk) 16:06, 25 June 2008 (UTC) "The Jones section has to stay in a page like this. It's way too big if its true. I don't know why it would be cut. The part about Harvey being scared of him should be added to it." —Preceding unsigned comment added by 75.215.117.116 (talk) 13:50, 7 June 2008 (UTC) "Finally, the entire Peoples Temple involvement, even with Jonestown literally dominating the Bay Area and Milk's key support, is only a tiny (6%) portion of the article, thus there is no undue weight issue. As well, included is only a tiny portion of Milk's involvement with the Temple." - obviously me.
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I have now cut the Peoples Temple section to just three sentences
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Frankly, there is much interesting about the relationship, but despite that most people weighed in response to his Rfc that the section should not be deleted, I have been worn down by Benjiboi's repeated edit warring and wholesale deletions of the entire section after every attempt to accommodate his concerns through edits. Thus, it is now just 3 sentences summarizing the issue. If anyone else wishes to continue to try to add interesting sourced NPOV information to Milk's Wikipedia article, I encourage you to do so. Battling the repeated edit warring and wholesale deletions of the entire section has become tiresome to me. Mosedschurte (talk) 07:41, 3 August 2008 (UTC)
I have followed this for quite a while (and at one point thought the article might need protection because of edit warring), and was going to suggest a compromise. The People's Temple issue and the Oliver Sipple case both deserve mention in this article, but clearly not the lengthy repetition of material that is presented elsewhere. However, it seems to me that three well-sourced sentences about People's Temple in a biographical article of this length is clearly not "undue weight", and a similar treatment of Oliver Sipple would be appropriate as well. --MCB (talk) 06:47, 4 August 2008 (UTC)
At this point, these criticisms supporting the Edit War have frankly become pretty laughable. For example, The text of the Time magazine article stating that Milk had "had spoken at political rallies at the Peoples Temple" was cited for precisely the text in the article currently stating "Milk spoke at political rallies at the Temple." You simply can't get more spot on than that. Regarding the clause that Milk "made statements in support of Jones", the sources state, for example:
While clearly, again, spot on in support of the clause, keep in mind that these quotes about Jones are not even included in the article as it stands. In support of the clause "and, after Jones and hundreds of Temple members fled to Guyana, attended a rally to oppose former relatives attacking the Temple", Reiterman's Raven specifically discusses Milk's attendance at this post-flight support rally with Art Agnos. Reiterman, Raven, p. 327. In support of the phrase "Milk wrote a letter to President Jimmy Carter referring to Jones 'as a man of the highest character' and writing that relatives of Temple members pressing for an investigation were making 'apparent bold-faced lies'", the following is cited:
As a sidenote, nearly all of those relatives died just months later. Including John Stoen, the son of Tim and Grace Stoen whom Milk specifically attacked in his letter to Carter as they were attempting to extricate their son and others from Jonestown. Months later, 6 year old John Stoen was found poisoned in Jim Jones' cabin in Jonestown. Again, as horrifying as it and Milk's comment now may appear to be perhaps to some, the end result isn't even in the article as is. Mosedschurte (talk) 13:08, 4 August 2008 (UTC)
New articleFor your consideration, I just created Political Alliances of the People's Temple out of material from the People's Temple, Willie Brown (politician), and George Moscone articles, which I trimmed and redirected accordingly. I think that's a useful way to organize the content centrally and avoid WP:UNDUE concerns. In editing, I see that the content was largely cut-and-pasted to appear nearly verbatim in multiple articles, which creates some forking problems. I suggest we agree on a similar move, integration, and link for the People's Temple material here. Thanks, Wikidemo (talk) 23:17, 4 August 2008 (UTC)
That's actually an interesting idea, but (edit) Benjiboi just cut from the article every single mention of Harvey Milk's support of the Peoples Temple during the investigation and attacking of the CRs attempting to extricate their relatives from Jonestown. There is now ZERO mention of it at all in the entire Milk article. Mosedschurte (talk) 01:30, 5 August 2008 (UTC)
Now that the page is unlocked (hopefully the edit warring can stop), I cut the section down to merely a 1 sentence summary with a link to the new article. As a heads up to those interested, a discussion is occurring on the new article's talk page about the Milk contents. Mosedschurte (talk) 16:01, 6 August 2008 (UTC) The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Sources needed
After the riots, the humiliated police showed up in force on Castro Street without authorization, and soon proceeded to enter the Elephant Walk Bar at the corner of 18th and Castro, smashing the place up and bashing heads of stunned patrons and employees. Several people required hospitalization, and the resulting lawsuits cost the City a fortune.
This is a serious allegation but at the moment it reads like a rumour. Apart from the non-encyclopaedic tone ("showed up", "smashing the place up and bashing heads" etc), this feels very anecdotal and could do with some sources. What sort of "authorisation" would the police need simply to go to a certain street — or was it entering the bar that was unauthorised, or were they acting on their own initiative without orders from superiors? Flapdragon 09:00, 11 April 2007 (UTC)
- Not sure if this has been addressed but see White Night Riots. Benjiboi 23:33, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
This is fact correct, it actually happened. I was living in San Francisco at the time, not very far from the Elephant Walk. The police went into the bar and busted up people. It was dubbed a police riot by all in the community. There were a series of investigations into the matter. The police were angry, it was the 70s, and they did what they pleasd back then, even in a place like San Francisco. Ricksf1 Ricksf1 (talk) 04:36, 12 April 2008 (UTC)
- The Elephant Walk information doesn't need to be extensive here but should be a few sentences, I think it was the first gay bar to have windows in the Castro, possible in the city as well. Banjeboi 05:13, 3 August 2008 (UTC)
Bust at city Hall
this section has loads of online material about the competition, fundraisers, political workings and the designs themselves being unveiled at City Hall for voting/comments. Benjiboi 23:35, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
- ^ Jonestown: The Life and Death of Peoples Temple. PBS.org.
- ^ a b c d Milk, Harvey Letter Addressed to President Jimmy Carter, Dated February 19, 1978
- ^ Reiterman, Tim (1982) "Raven: The Untold Story of Reverand Jim Jones and His People" ISBN 0-525-24136-1 page 176
- ^ Transcript of Conversation Between Jim Jones and Rosalynn Carter pledging support for Carter regarding LGBT-oriented bar issue, Jonestown Institute, San Diego State University
- ^ a b Kinsolving, Kathleen and Tom. "Madman in Our Midst: Jim Jones and the California Cover Up." 1998.
- ^ Another Day of Death Time Magazine, December 11, 1978
- ^ Sawyer, Mary My Lord, What a Mourning:’ Twenty Years Since Jonestown, Jonestown Institute at SDSU
- ^ Reiterman, Tim (1982) "Raven: The Untold Story of Reverand Jim Jones and His People" ISBN 0-525-24136-1 page 298