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GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 01:31, 4 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria

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1. Prose  Pass

2. Verifiability  Pass

3. Depth of Coverage  Pass

4. Neutral  Pass

5. Stable  Pass

6. Illustrations  Pass

7. Miscellaneous  Pass

Comments

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1.

  • "Michigan based" - Should be hyphenated
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 10:45, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Can you add conversion templates for the distances in the article?
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 10:53, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "brand trade name of "haskelite."" - Be consistent with the capitalization of Haskelite
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:02, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "There was no ribs used in the building of the canoe." - Were, not was
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:07, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • " In 1927 the company" - I think there should be a comma after 1927
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:14, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "A Haskelite specialty plywood designed for aircraft construction was invented in 1939 called Duramold" - "called Duramold" is a misplace modifier,

I think it should be between construction and was

 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:38, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Link formaldehyde and phenol
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:41, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Howard Hughs" - The standard spelling is Howard Hughes, use the standard spelling
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:03, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "It's top speed" - remove the '
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:44, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

2.

  • Publisher should be added for the Kane and Motor Body refs
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:50, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add publisher locations when known
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 12:04, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

3.

  • Lead's a little short, but it's a short article, so I'd say it's sufficient
 Done - expanded. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 12:09, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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7.

  • Should this really be in Category:Adhesives? It's made from adhesives, but it's not an adhesive itself.
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:44, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I added another conversion template for the temperature. Passing. Hog Farm (talk) 16:20, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]