Talk:Henry Janzen/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 13:08, 25 October 2023 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (No original research): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Notes

• added kick returner and DB cats
• do you see any good images of his playing career besides the cards?
• add CFL to lead perhaps
• add height and weight
• infobox says cfl all star but that was West all star per statscrew and 1965 CFL season
• add 3× to infobox by grey cup
• add high school to infobox
• "In 1960" That is linked and so are some other years but I don't think we usually do that.
• "over the Hamilton Tiger-Cats" remove hamilton
• "The Winnipeg Blue Bombers made" remove winnipeg
• "and scored three touchdowns, a career-high" change to "a career-high three touchdowns"
• add vanier cup to infobox
• "back-to-back national championships" in lead. perhaps change to vanier cup
• "As a dependable Canadian back-up" in lead. Was he actually a backup? the body didn't say. I was assuming he was a starter on defense?
• "retiring in 1966 to accept a position at the University of Manitoba" was that a coaching job
• "induction to the Manitoba Sports Hall of Fame" hes not on the article for that? also can you include the year
• "induction to the Winnipeg Blue Bombers Hall of Fame" add year
• link Regina, Saskatchewan
• remove refs from lead
• All-Star is written differently in the lead and body. Use "All-Star" since that's what's in the infobox
• If Weston Wildcats is a redlink in the body, redlink it in the infobox

That's all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 13:29, 25 October 2023 (UTC)

 Closed with the nominator BeanieFan11's permission. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 20:16, 22 December 2023 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.