Talk:History of Brentford F.C./GA1

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Reviewer: Casliber (talk · contribs) 08:12, 21 March 2021 (UTC)

Taking a look now.....will make straightforward copyedits as I go and drop queries below...Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 08:12, 21 March 2021 (UTC)

• Any reason why the history articles are divided at 1954 and 1986?

No as far as I can see. REDMAN 2019 (talk) 13:02, 28 March 2021 (UTC)

Yeah I think it was pre-decided somewhere....Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 11:56, 29 March 2021 (UTC)

• Any commentary on why McLintock couldn't deliver?  Done added some info

• Brentford flirted with the playoff positions during the 1987–88 season and in 1988–89,[4] a late run almost took the club into the playoffs - try not to use "playoffs" twice in the one sentence  Done

• but an unbeaten run in the second half of the season... - traditional here to say how many matches...  Done

• Perryman resigned on the eve of the 1990–91 season... - do we know why?  Done

• and captain Terry Evans suffered a long-term injury on the opening day of the season. - may as well say what the injury was  Done

• Just two defeats in 11 matches put the Bees up to 10th by the end of 1992 - am I missing something here? You didn't mention a poor start just before this...?  Done

• The Bees were easily defeated 3–1 in the fifth round by Charlton Athletic, but too many draws late in the season dropped the club to a 3rd-place finish..'' - "but" is odd here as they are both bad things so I can't see the contrast...? {[done}}

• Finally - the trick is to avoid these articles turning into a chronological sequence of factoids - any analysis on why any manager did well or poorly, or any other bits on particularly good players would be good to add if you can find them.

A promising article with alot of heart in it...needs some polishing but eminently doable Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 09:20, 21 March 2021 (UTC)

@Casliber: I have addressed all of your concerns. Would you be able to take a look over the article and seem what the situation is now? REDMAN 2019 (talk) 13:13, 28 March 2021 (UTC)

1. Well written?:

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5. Reasonably stable?

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Pass or Fail: Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 04:31, 30 March 2021 (UTC)