Talk:Holly Jolly Secrets/GA1
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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 17:41, 23 April 2018 (UTC)
- Who is BMO?
- Running time is only 22 minutes for two episodes?
- " a secret about Ice King." the Ice King
- Wikilink Antiquarian
- ""Holly Jolly Secrets" was written and storyboarded by Kent Osborne and Somvilay Xayaphone from a story developed by Mark Banker, Patrick McHale, Osborne, and series creator Pendleton Ward. The entry was directed by Larry Leichliter." Sources?
- "with many applauding the exploration of the Ice King's past history." from the lede, yet I only see two critics in the article? Is there more critical commentary out there? If so, it should be added, because while not part of the GA criteria, this article looks a little vulnerable to AFD at the moment.
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- Just let me know if you can't. I'm willing to pass it as is, if you change that "many" wording in the lead. Courcelles (talk) 18:40, 23 April 2018 (UTC)
GA on hold, pretty well-written stuff. Courcelles (talk) 17:52, 23 April 2018 (UTC)
- Promoting, meets the GA criteria. Courcelles (talk) 15:58, 24 April 2018 (UTC)