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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 23:09, 26 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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  • If it wasn't a single then why does it have a release date?

 Done

  • Hip hop music doesn't reference electro hop at all, better of unlinking it here and elsewhere in the article.

 Done Electro hop is a term for "electronic hip-hop", so I just linked electronic and hip-hop

  • Genres should also be alphabetical

 Done

Lead
  • is a song by → is a song recorded by

 Done

  • taken from her → for her

 Done

  • promoted the song briefly → briefly performed a part of the song

 Done

Background
  • that Minaj was aiming for a first quarter release in 2012. → that minaj was aiming to release her second album within the first quarter of 2012.

 Done

Composition
  • Keep it all as one paragraph, no need for a two sentence para.

 Done

  • In his review of the song, Andrew Unterberger of Popdust → Unterberger

 Done

Critical reception
  • complimenting Minaj → for doing what?

 Done

  • was somewhat overshadowed → was overshadowed

 Done

  • Allmusic shouldn't be in italics

 Done

  • Neither Slant Magazine

 Done

Music video
  • Rename to Promotion and put the one sentence about Live performance at the end of the Music video paragraph, thus removing the Live performance section.

 Done

Status

On hold. I'm going on holiday soon so if you can get this done ASAP.  — AARONTALK 16:52, 27 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

GA  — AARONTALK 11:21, 28 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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