Talk:I Will Never Let You Down/GA1
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 11:01, 31 December 2022 (UTC)
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I will get on with this today! --K. Peake 11:01, 31 December 2022 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
[edit]- Infobox looks good!
Mention the release was after Ora teased the song earlier in the month"on the Dance Club Songs" → "on the Dance Club Songs chart"For the top 50 sentence, instead mention the number of other countries it entered this ranking in and add some included to avoid a supermarket list"on 31 March." → "on 31 March 2014."
Background and composition
[edit]- Img looks good!
"by uploading the single's cover art" → "uploading the single's cover art"Wikilink music video[5][7][1] shouldn't these be in numerical order?"Her album was scheduled" → "The album was scheduled""Musically, it is an" → "Musically, "I Will Never Let You Down" is an"The electro-pop genre is not sourcedRemove overly obvious wikilink on guitar
Reception
[edit]"has since received critical acclaim" → "was met with critical acclaim""start it over again."" → "start it over again"." per MOS:QUOTEPipe Vulture to Vulture.com per MOS:LINK2SECT"elaborated "if your Monday" → "elaborated, "If your Monday" per the sourceThe two singles aren't directly mentioned by Vox, so add using []"she has definitely found" → "Ora has definitely found" per the sourceWrite "after her 2012 singles" instead, to avoid wasting time writing the year for each one"more than 994,000 units." → "more than 994,000 units in the UK."Remove pipe on topped per WP:OVERLINK"number 5 on the ARIA Singles Chart and reached number 9" → "number five on the ARIA Singles Chart and reached number nine" per MOS:NUMAdd the sources for the CHR/Top 40 and Hot AC charts
Promotion
[edit]Remove wikilink on music video"Taking place in LA," → "Taking place in Los Angeles," because that is obviously what the source means"in a outdoor-setting" → "in an outdoor-setting"Shouldn't you write "the two backup dancers Polly and Sophie Duniam." or something similar since I'm not sure if namely is required"in front of a pink setting as well as in a" → "in front of a pink setting and in a""as "sweet" and "sexy", writing" → "as "sweet and sexy", writing" since these come directly after each other"off [Ora's] playful side."" → "off [Ora's] playful side"." per MOS:QUOTE"Garibaldi for MTV noted" → "Christina Garibaldi for MTV noted" with the wikilink"vibe of the song."" → "vibe of the song".""clothes, commenting that "We're" → "clothes, commenting: "We're""an elegant model."" → "an elegant model".""On 24 June," → "On 24 June 2014,"Cut down the number of remix artists mentioned to avoid a supermarket listRemove the release year in brackets for the compilation album since the release date is already mentioned in this sentence
Track listing
[edit]- Good
Charts
[edit]- Good
Certifications
[edit]- Good
Release history
[edit]Format → Format(s)Label → Label(s)
See also
[edit]- Good
References
[edit]- Copyvio score looks very good at 33.3%!!!
Pipe Capital to Capital (radio network) on ref 1 instead of ref 3Pipe Official Charts Company to Official Charts on ref 5Ref 6 is missing a space between Returns and WithWikilink Spotify on ref 7completemusicupdate.com → Complete Music Update on ref 9 with the wikilinkPipe Vogue to Vogue (magazine) on ref 10Cite The Hollywood Reporter as work/website instead on ref 11 with the wikilinkWikilink Apple Music on the first instance of ref 12Cite Digital Spy as publisher instead on ref 16Pipe Vulture to Vulture.com per MOS:LINK2SECT on ref 23Wikilink MTV on ref 53
Final comments and verdict
[edit]On hold until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 13:05, 31 December 2022 (UTC)
- Hey @Kyle Peake: happy new year and sorry for the late reply. I'm currently very busy with some personal matters and I just wanted to let you know that I will fix all the issues tomorrow. Iaof2017 (talk) 13:39, 4 January 2023 (UTC)
- Iaof2017 That is good, I look forward to seeing that today and I hope with all my heart you are alright. --K. Peake 07:43, 5 January 2023 (UTC)
- Thank you a lot Kyle Peake, really appreciate it. I was/am really busy with university stuff and so on. Anyway, everything should be addressed now and thanks for the review. :D Iaof2017 (talk) 00:03, 6 January 2023 (UTC)
- ✓ Pass now, good job and it's within the week target for GAs! --K. Peake 08:54, 6 January 2023 (UTC)
- Great. :) Iaof2017 (talk) 12:13, 6 January 2023 (UTC)