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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 11:01, 31 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I will get on with this today! --K. Peake 11:01, 31 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Infobox looks good!
  • Mention the release was after Ora teased the song earlier in the month
  • "on the Dance Club Songs" → "on the Dance Club Songs chart"
  • For the top 50 sentence, instead mention the number of other countries it entered this ranking in and add some included to avoid a supermarket list
  • "on 31 March." → "on 31 March 2014."

Background and composition

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  • Img looks good!
  • "by uploading the single's cover art" → "uploading the single's cover art"
  • Wikilink music video
  • [5][7][1] shouldn't these be in numerical order?
  • "Her album was scheduled" → "The album was scheduled"
  • "Musically, it is an" → "Musically, "I Will Never Let You Down" is an"
  • The electro-pop genre is not sourced
  • Remove overly obvious wikilink on guitar

Reception

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  • "has since received critical acclaim" → "was met with critical acclaim"
  • "start it over again."" → "start it over again"." per MOS:QUOTE
  • Pipe Vulture to Vulture.com per MOS:LINK2SECT
  • "elaborated "if your Monday" → "elaborated, "If your Monday" per the source
  • The two singles aren't directly mentioned by Vox, so add using []
  • "she has definitely found" → "Ora has definitely found" per the source
  • Write "after her 2012 singles" instead, to avoid wasting time writing the year for each one
  • "more than 994,000 units." → "more than 994,000 units in the UK."
  • Remove pipe on topped per WP:OVERLINK
  • "number 5 on the ARIA Singles Chart and reached number 9" → "number five on the ARIA Singles Chart and reached number nine" per MOS:NUM
  • Add the sources for the CHR/Top 40 and Hot AC charts

Promotion

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  • Remove wikilink on music video
  • "Taking place in LA," → "Taking place in Los Angeles," because that is obviously what the source means
  • "in a outdoor-setting" → "in an outdoor-setting"
  • Shouldn't you write "the two backup dancers Polly and Sophie Duniam." or something similar since I'm not sure if namely is required
  • "in front of a pink setting as well as in a" → "in front of a pink setting and in a"
  • "as "sweet" and "sexy", writing" → "as "sweet and sexy", writing" since these come directly after each other
  • "off [Ora's] playful side."" → "off [Ora's] playful side"." per MOS:QUOTE
  • "Garibaldi for MTV noted" → "Christina Garibaldi for MTV noted" with the wikilink
  • "vibe of the song."" → "vibe of the song"."
  • "clothes, commenting that "We're" → "clothes, commenting: "We're"
  • "an elegant model."" → "an elegant model"."
  • "On 24 June," → "On 24 June 2014,"
  • Cut down the number of remix artists mentioned to avoid a supermarket list
  • Remove the release year in brackets for the compilation album since the release date is already mentioned in this sentence

Track listing

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  • Good

Charts

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  • Good

Certifications

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  • Good

Release history

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  • Format → Format(s)
  • Label → Label(s)

See also

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  • Good

References

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Final comments and verdict

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