Talk:Interstate 475 (Michigan)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Mark Arsten (talk · contribs) 19:46, 1 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Will review, hopefully comments will be posted this weekend. Mark Arsten (talk) 19:46, 1 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Ok, I've read through the article. This is actually the first road article I've reviewed, so I may be unfamiliar with some of the conventions. The article looks like it is in fine shape though, seems to be pretty well written. I made a few copyedits, feel free to revert if I damaged anything. Mark Arsten (talk) 22:43, 3 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I'd suggest putting the second paragraph in chronological order, mentioning the Buick name before the UAW.
You mention that the UAW name is "honoring the United Auto Workers, a labor union which was active in Flint", but don't explain the reasoning behind the Buick name, might want to do so.
- Added. Imzadi 1979 → 23:28, 3 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"At the same time, the name of I-69/M-21 in Flint was changed from the "Chevrolet Freeway" to the "Chevrolet-Buick Freeway"." I'm not certain if this is significant enough for the lead, but not a big deal.
I-69 is linked twice here.
- Fixed. Imzadi 1979 → 23:28, 3 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

"where it runs for about 1+1⁄2 miles (2.4 km)" I'm curious why you used a fraction here?
- To imply the level of imprecision in the measurement... 1.5 miles would imply a precision to the tenth of a mile, but 1½ miles implies only a precision to the nearest half (or maybe quarter) of a mile. Imzadi 1979 → 23:28, 3 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  - Interesting, I hadn't thought of that.

"William Durant managed the fledgling Buick Manufacturing Company, making it the number one car-building in the country by 1908." Did you leave out a word here? Because otherwise I don't think "car-building" would be hyphenated.
- Added missing word. Imzadi 1979 → 23:28, 3 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"The strike started on December 30, 1936 when workers" I think a comma is generally placed after the year here too.
- Added. Imzadi 1979 → 23:28, 3 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Might want to link National Guard here.
"January 3, 1937 when workers at the plant sat down on the job." Looks like an incomplete sentence here.
- Fixed. Imzadi 1979 →
Another I-69 repeat link.
- Given the distance since the link the lead, this is fine to leave linked. Imzadi 1979 → 23:28, 3 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  - Ok, fair enough.
"President Franklin D. Roosevelt encouraged the two parties to sit down once more, and an agreement was signed, recognizing the UAW in the 17 striking plants across the country.[16] A local politician wanted to honor not just the automotive pioneers in Flint, but the workers that worked in the plants." Should probably note when the local politician came up with this idea.
- Sources do not specify when the idea was developed, so I can't add that detail. Imzadi 1979 → 23:28, 3 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  - Ok, I added a paragraph break here.

Genesee County is a repeat link here.
- This is standard for highway junction/exit lists. If the freeway crossed county lines, it would have a county column, and each county would be linked, per MOS:RJL. Imzadi 1979 → 23:28, 3 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  - Ok, good to know, that's fine then.

Images and links look fine to me, I think I'll pass this now. Mark Arsten (talk) 23:36, 3 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]