Talk:Interstate 84 in Utah/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Imzadi1979 (talk · contribs) 02:44, 31 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
Just a few little comments below.
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
Looks good.
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
a caption for the map would be a good addition, otherwise all is good here.
Overall:
Pass/Fail:
I'm passing since I'm confident that the prose will be touched up quickly. The comment about a future ACR hold though. Imzadi 1979 → 03:25, 31 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

"The highway enters Box Elder County near Snowville before becoming concurrent with I-15 in Tremonton before traveling south through Brigham City and Ogden." That could be split up or reworded to get rid of " ... before ... before ... "
- Fixed. --Admr Boltz 03:42, 31 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]

"This is expressed in terms of average annual daily traffic (AADT), a measure of traffic volume for any average day of the year." I've found it's better to just pipe a link in the next sentence along the lines of In 2012, UDOT calculated [[average annual daily traffic|on average]] that ..." than to try to add a quick explanation of AADT.
- My personal preference is to spell it out a bit more clearly. --Admr Boltz 03:43, 31 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
In general, there are some prose things I'd copy edit if this article were going to ACR, but for GA, I'm ok leaving them. I'll make an offer now to help c/e pre-ACR actually.