Talk:Israeli cuisine/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Pyrotec (talk) 23:07, 22 March 2010 (UTC)

Starting review. Pyrotec (talk) 23:07, 22 March 2010 (UTC)

Initial comments

• I've done a quick couple of read throughs, yesterday and today, and at this stage of the review the article appears to be at or about GA standard: so far, its readable, well referenced, well illustrated and has a wide-ranging scope.

• I will now start the detailed review and this may take a couple of days, or so. I should also note that at this stage I will be mostly highlighting "problems", if any; so this stage might seem somewhat negative (but there again it might not). Pyrotec (talk) 09:54, 24 March 2010 (UTC)

Overall sumary

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

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Overall a Good Article, however the WP:Lead is rather "thin" and could do with some expansion. The main body of the article appears to be quite comprehensive.

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality:

   B. MoS compliance:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources:

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

Congratulations on the quality of the article. I'm awarding the article GA-status, as it stands. The WP:Lead, however, would benefit from some attention. Pyrotec (talk) 08:41, 28 March 2010 (UTC)