Talk:Japanese cruiser Tokiwa/GA1
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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 16:12, 5 May 2015 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose):
b (MoS):
- One dupe link in the lead
- Watch ENGVAR, I see armor and armour
- I'd probably pipe the link to Steregushchiy so it matches the other ships mentioned in the article.
- "Tokiwa was third of six when..." - I know you're talking about Togo's line, but most will not.
- Added "in line", but I'm not sure if I should clarify that it's of the 2nd Division. What do you think?
- You could also pipe line of battle in - though I saw another reference to this earlier in the article, so the link should probably go there.
- Done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:09, 6 May 2015 (UTC)
- You could also pipe line of battle in - though I saw another reference to this earlier in the article, so the link should probably go there.
- Added "in line", but I'm not sure if I should clarify that it's of the 2nd Division. What do you think?
- a (prose):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- Probably ought to give some context on the arrival of the 2nd Pacific Squadron - otherwise, readers will assume it's the ships from Port Arthur and Vladivostok
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- File:Japanese cruiser Tokiwa.jpg - need a source for this
- Could find a source on Google image, but I'm not to concerned about this since it's obviously a postcard.
- File:Japanese cruiser Tokiwa.jpg - need a source for this
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Thanks for looking this over; now I've got to go and make changes to all the other articles from which I copy-pasted major sections! I think that I've dealt with all your comments, let me know if there's anything that I missed.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:03, 5 May 2015 (UTC)