Talk:Jigsaw (Saw character)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sjones23 (talk · contribs) 21:08, 11 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose quality:

B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
The lead should be expanded to three paragraphs. The In other media section needs to be combined with the fictional character biography (which coincidentally also needs to be trimmed down). The concept and creation section needs to be expanded.
Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
A. References to sources:
Some of these citations are fansites and should be removed.

B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

C. No original research:
No original research so far.
Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects:

B. Focused:
Is it neutral?
Fair representation without bias:
Is it stable?
No edit wars, etc:
Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:

B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail:
This article is on hold for now.

I will also check and see what aspects we need to work on. Thanks, Lord Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 21:22, 11 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Nothing's been fixed in a month, failing this. Wizardman 05:22, 8 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]