Talk:Jonas Mouton/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: CrowzRSA 17:58, 23 December 2010 (UTC)

Comments

• What verifies Mouton played as a defensive back at Venice High School.?
  • done.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 19:01, 26 December 2010 (UTC)
• What verifies The major high school rating reports evaluated him as a safety?
  • That is supported by the remainder of the fully reffed paragraph.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 19:01, 26 December 2010 (UTC)
• Shouldn't "Early life" be titles "High School" instead?
  • O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 19:03, 26 December 2010 (UTC)
• Per WP:ORDINAL, single digit numbers should be spelt out.
  • Thanks.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 19:05, 26 December 2010 (UTC)
• You have consistency issues with spelling out numbers and numerals (i.e. he started eleven of the twelve games, a new career high with 11 tackles)
  • fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 19:34, 26 December 2010 (UTC)
• Using "v." is preferred over "vs." (i.e. "Bears v. Packers" is preferred over "Bears vs. Packers"
  • fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 19:07, 26 December 2010 (UTC)
• Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at WP:Lead
  • Expanded to 2 paragraphs.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 19:14, 26 December 2010 (UTC)
• Please fix dab links
  • Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 19:09, 26 December 2010 (UTC)

Result

GA review (see here for criteria)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail: