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GA Review

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Reviewer: Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk · contribs) 14:43, 8 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Prose

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  • Repeating the same citation over and over again next to each other is unnecessary Done
  • Section headers that are like "Career in the ..." could be rewritten as "... career" (suggestion only) Done
  • Second paragraph in lead should be split Done Kierzek (talk) 18:46, 9 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 15:03, 8 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]