Talk:Just a Kiss (song)/GA1
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Reviewer: AJona1992 (talk · contribs) 14:09, 20 December 2011 (UTC)
- Comments from AJona1992
- According to this report, there is one WP:DAB link. Please fix.
- According to this report, there is a WP:DEADLINK, please fix.
- In the lead, why is single wikilink? Why not wikilink instead lead single?
- Wikilink beats per minute
- File:Lady Antebellum Just a Kiss.ogg needs a "further reasoning" rational. Look at File:Amor Prohibido.ogg and File:Rolling in Deep.ogg for an example.
- In the "Music and lyrics" please wikilink Billboard and delink the one in "Chart performance" and "Music video"
- "on the chart dated May 21, 2011." - needs to be rewritten ---> ""Just a Kiss" debuted on the US Billboard Hot Country Songs chart at number 28 on May 21, 2011"
- the couple farewell each other. - this sentence is missing a word
- "on April 2011" are you sure that sounds right?
- whole song on the tenth season of US reality television show American Idol. - is missing a word
- TV Guide Canada needs to be in italics
- This source (currently FN#31) does not verify that the song received any certification from RIAA.
- FN#5 "[CD album]" ---> "[CD]", also delink United States
- FN#12 wikilink About.com
- FN#13 wikilink Billboard like the way you did it to FN#27
- FN#23 "Billboard Music Awards: Britney Spears joins Rihanna, Beyonce runs the world, Cee Lo spins in Space" ---> "Billboard Music Awards: Britney Spears joins Rihanna, Beyonce runs the world, Cee Lo spins in Space"
- FN#28, FN#29, FN#30, FN#40 be consistent in weather or not you wikilink works and publishers all the time or only once.
- FN#50 italic TV Guide Canada
- FN#68 be consistent in the way you retrieve dates.
- What makes this a reliable source?
- I will take care of this. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 14:11, 20 December 2011 (UTC)
- Alright :-) Best, Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 14:12, 20 December 2011 (UTC)
- Fixed issues. As for the RIAA link, we have to enter the artist and song manually. Amazon.com is being used to show that the single received a CD single, nothing else. Novice7 (talk) 04:14, 23 December 2011 (UTC)
- Alright :-) Best, Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 14:12, 20 December 2011 (UTC)
- Everything has been fixed. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 15:16, 27 December 2011 (UTC)
- @Novice7 Amazon.com is clearly not a WP:RS at all. You don't need a retail to verify its existence, rather, the artwork, Billboard peak positions, certifications and music reviews can do that. Once this source can be fixed, I'll pass the article. Best, Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 16:07, 27 December 2011 (UTC)
- Amazon can be used for release dates. RIAA cannot be fixed. You have to search for it by adding the artist's name and the song. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 16:19, 27 December 2011 (UTC)
- @Novice7 Amazon.com is clearly not a WP:RS at all. You don't need a retail to verify its existence, rather, the artwork, Billboard peak positions, certifications and music reviews can do that. Once this source can be fixed, I'll pass the article. Best, Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 16:07, 27 December 2011 (UTC)
- According to RIAA, the certifications for "Just a Kiss" are for digital sales, please represent them as such. Best, Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 16:28, 27 December 2011 (UTC)
- (edit conflict) I have added the release notes ref (with ISSN) too, and added note for the RIAA ref. Novice7 (talk) 16:30, 27 December 2011 (UTC)
- I haven't removed the Amazon ref, yet, I can if you want me to. Novice7 (talk) 16:31, 27 December 2011 (UTC)
- According to this you need to add "digital" to the certification template, also the "Certifications" does not follow Template:Certification Table Entry. Yes, remove all instances of Amazon as per this discussion with User:Jezhotwells. Best, Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 16:38, 27 December 2011 (UTC)
- I haven't used the certification template on the article. Removed Amazon.com ref. Thanks for reviewing the article :) Novice7 (talk) 16:42, 27 December 2011 (UTC)
- Well it will only work if you do use it. Best, Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 16:44, 27 December 2011 (UTC)
- I haven't used the certification template on the article. Removed Amazon.com ref. Thanks for reviewing the article :) Novice7 (talk) 16:42, 27 December 2011 (UTC)
- According to this you need to add "digital" to the certification template, also the "Certifications" does not follow Template:Certification Table Entry. Yes, remove all instances of Amazon as per this discussion with User:Jezhotwells. Best, Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 16:38, 27 December 2011 (UTC)
- I haven't removed the Amazon ref, yet, I can if you want me to. Novice7 (talk) 16:31, 27 December 2011 (UTC)
- (edit conflict) I have added the release notes ref (with ISSN) too, and added note for the RIAA ref. Novice7 (talk) 16:30, 27 December 2011 (UTC)
- It's been seven (7) days since I put this article on hold and the only issue remained was about the certifications. Since I did notified Novice7 and Jivesh that if issues are not resolved I would have to fail the article. Best, Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 03:04, 28 December 2011 (UTC)
- I did make the necessary fixes on December 23. The only remaining issue was the certification template issue, which I would've fixed today morning (I live in a different time zone). I have nominated the article again. Novice7 (talk) 04:26, 28 December 2011 (UTC)
- Comment from another editor
- There is nothing rigid about the seven days. If editors are still working on the article, the time period should be extended, according to the GA "rules".
- Also, there is nothing in the WP:WIAGA that requires Template:Certification Table Entry. MathewTownsend (talk) 03:26, 28 December 2011 (UTC)