Talk:Kőbánya cellar system/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Mdob (talk · contribs) 18:47, 5 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

GA criteria

Well-written:

(a) the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct

(b) it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation

The lead section is a mess. The first paragraph is way to long (the text after "While intricate ..." should be separated in a new paragraph or better yet, deleted. There are too many citations for the reading to be smooth.

. Ok, corrected. The lead section is now in two neat paragraphs.

Mdob (talk) 19:45, 5 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Verifiable with no original research:

(a) it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline

(b) reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose)

(c) it contains no original research

Broad in its coverage:

(a) it addresses the main aspects of the topic

(b) it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style)

Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.

Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.

Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:

8 good, small, non-intrusive images Mdob (talk) 19:45, 5 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

(a) media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content

(b) media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions

subtitle of the image (Anton Dreher Sr. (id. Dréher Antal)) should be changed to something more informative, like "Anton Dreher Sr., austrian brewer, first wine brewer in the Cellar" Mdob (talk) 19:45, 5 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Ok. Corrected. Mdob (talk) 19:13, 17 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Mdob and Rev-san: Hello! What is the status of this review? Doesn't look like any progress has been made in almost 2 months.--Dom497 (talk) 01:33, 2 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Mdob and Dom497: I have fixed the article as good as I could. I hope it gets GA status. Good luck with further work on Wikipedia! --Rev L. Snowfox (talk) 17:34, 14 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]