Talk:K-148 (Kansas highway)

GA Review

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Reviewer: ArnabSaha (talk · contribs) 15:27, 16 October 2020 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it well written?

   A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:

   B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:

2. Is it verifiable with no original research?

   A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:

   B. All in-line citations are from reliable sources, including those for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons—science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines:

   C. It contains no original research:

   D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:

   B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):

4. Is it neutral?

   It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:

5. Is it stable?

   It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:

6. Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?

   A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:

   B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

Comments

• Remove some duplinks, like Barnes.
  • I think MOS:DUPLINK says that it can be repeated the first occurrence after the lead? This is usually done in road articles. 420Traveler (talk) 02:59, 19 October 2020 (UTC)
    • Oh yes  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  11:56, 19 October 2020 (UTC)
• K-148 is a 86.665 --> An (as the number starts with vowel).
  •  Fixed 420Traveler (talk) 02:59, 19 October 2020 (UTC)
• "... length despite the fact that the last..." --> I would suggest changing it to "... length although the last" to make it simple and easy.
  •  Fixed 420Traveler (talk) 02:59, 19 October 2020 (UTC)
• If possible, add an image.
  •  Fixed Was able to find one. 420Traveler (talk) 21:35, 22 October 2020 (UTC)
• "Before state highways were numbered..." the same is present twice. Edit and change anyone of them.
  •  Fixed I think? 420Traveler (talk) 02:59, 19 October 2020 (UTC)
• 'Auto trails' capital letter not required, and link the first one in lead.
  •  Fixed 420Traveler (talk) 02:59, 19 October 2020 (UTC)
• Citation [16] isn't properly formatted.
  •  Fixed I just removed it as it was not needed and a dead link. 420Traveler (talk) 20:03, 21 October 2020 (UTC)

 Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  18:33, 21 October 2020 (UTC)

ArnabSaha asked if I could look at this. I only had a few minor comments:

• Before state highways were numbered in Kansas there were auto trails, the former Meridian Highway crosses K-148 slightly west of Talmo, the former Kansas White Way crosses between K-15 and Barnes, and the former Pikes Peak Ocean to Ocean Highway crosses by Hanover. - this is a run-on sentence. I suggest splitting into two after "auto trails".
  •  Fixed 420Traveler (talk) 14:25, 29 October 2020 (UTC)
• Because each subsection is only one paragraph long, I would suggest removing the subheaders in the "History" section, which appear unnecessary. However, the subheaders in the "Route description" section seem to serve the purpose of separating the general route description from the specific route description. So I would instead suggest splitting these subsections into 2 paragraphs each, if possible.
  •  Fixed 420Traveler (talk) 14:25, 29 October 2020 (UTC)
• K-148 is not included in the National Highway System.[6] The National Highway System is a system of highways important to the nation's defense, economy, and mobility. - On the other hand, I would combine these two sentences.
  •  Fixed 420Traveler (talk) 14:25, 29 October 2020 (UTC)
• The highway continues east for 3.2 miles (5.1 km) then crosses Republican River, then passes the unincorporated community of Norway and has an at-grade crossing with a KYLE Railway track. - this seems like a run-on, probably because of the use of "then" twice in the same sentence.
  •  Fixed 420Traveler (talk) 14:25, 29 October 2020 (UTC)
• KYLE Railway - any link?
  •  Fixed Found one. 420Traveler (talk) 14:25, 29 October 2020 (UTC)
• Here K-148 begins to overlap K-9 as the two highways continue east. - here, you may want to link to concurrency (road).
  •  Fixed 420Traveler (talk) 14:25, 29 October 2020 (UTC)

These are the comments I had. epicgenius (talk) 18:54, 28 October 2020 (UTC)

pinging @420Traveler:  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  10:34, 29 October 2020 (UTC)

@ArnabSaha: Everything should be fixed now. 420Traveler (talk) 14:25, 29 October 2020 (UTC)

Congrats  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  15:41, 29 October 2020 (UTC)