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Hey John B123, I agree with the advert template—I kind of felt the same way when I was writing this page, but I felt stuck and decided to just publish it and work on improving it after. Do you have any recommendations for specific segments I should focus on? I appreciate the help. إيان (talk) 21:18, 8 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@إيان: - Hi. Whilst the article doesn't come across as purely promotional, it does come across like an "about us" page on a company's website. I've looked at the page again, and nothing individually jumps out as being the problem, it just comes across too much like "corporate-speak". Perhaps splitting it up into more sections and then expanding them would help (so it doesn't read like a list of achievements). Maybe add some background on Huda Smitshuijzen AbiFarès, the significance of the Arabic word khatt etc. Sorry I can't give you anything more concrete than this. Regards --John B123 (talk) 21:47, 8 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Hey John B123, thanks for your feedback. I cleaned up the article a bit and removed the template. Let me know if you think it still needs some work. Kind regards, إيان (talk) 23:13, 19 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]
