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- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose):
b (MoS):
- a (prose):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
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- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
There are a few things that need clarification. 1) The intro can be a bit confusing; it says they "lived in Scandinavia", but then it goes on to talk about "Byzantine records" and "Rus' law-codes", without any further explanation. This is explained further down, but should get a mention also here. 2) Varangians is wikilinked, but there should be a brief explanation of who they were in the text. 3) Their "Status in Eastern Europe" seems a bit out of place before it's even been discussed who they were.
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars etc.:
- No edit wars etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Otherwise a good article, that I enjoyed reading and found very interesting. Good luck! Lampman (talk) 20:51, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail:
- Sorry for the delay. Everything looks in order now, and the article has improved even further through expansions. Good work! Lampman (talk) 20:49, 25 January 2009 (UTC)