Talk:Lamentation (Millennium)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 23:52, 13 May 2012 (UTC)

• Plot: "the poisoned judge had also been killed with the same substance." -> "the judge had also been poisoned with the same substance."
• Plot: "that his entity" should 'his' be 'this'?'
• References: Should Ref. 9 be titled "Room with No View" instead of 'Pilot'?

Those are the only issues I could readily spot. On hold for seven days.--Gen. Quon (talk) 15:09, 14 May 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for looking at this one for me. I think I've seen to everything there; let me know if you spot anything else. GRAPPLE X 16:16, 14 May 2012 (UTC)

Excellent, I will pass this now. Your GA reviews generally don't have too many issues.--Gen. Quon (talk) 01:44, 15 May 2012 (UTC)