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  • "In order to pass and get the straight A grades she desires" I would change the verb "get" to one of a more specific meaning.

Other than a couple of minor changes, this is the only change I would suggest. I'll leave it up to you to change it, because it does at the moment still make sense - just I feel it would be better with a less vague verb. Otherwise, feel free to have a look at my changes and make any alterations you feel adequate.

In the long run, good luck with any future improvements with the article. It's another good read, well-structured and easily meets the GA criteria.

GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
    Peanut4 (talk) 23:16, 6 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]