Talk:Liu Geping/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MPJ-DK (talk · contribs) 01:46, 8 April 2016 (UTC)

I will be picking up the review of this one - both for the Wiki Cup and the GA cup as well. I will be making my review comments over the next couple of days.

Side note, I would love some input on a couple of Featured List candidates, Mexican National Light Heavyweight Championship and NWA World Historic Welterweight Championship. I am not asking for Quid pro Quo, but all help is appreciated.  MPJ-US  01:46, 8 April 2016 (UTC)

GA Toolbox

I like to get this checked out first, I have found issues using this that has led to quick fails so it's important this passes muster.

Peer review tool

• No issues Y

Copyright violations Tool

• No issues Y

Disambiguation links

• No issues Y

External links

• No issues Y

Well Written

• "and government, but" does not need the comma
• "Party of China, and then spearheaded" no need for a comma
• "which he was sent by the Communist Party to Shaanxi to work for Yang Hucheng's army." maybe revise it to "which the Communist Party sent him to Shaanxi to work for Yang Hucheng's army"
• "Communist Party branch of Tianjin" I think that may be backwards, "The Tianjin branch of the Communist Party"?
• "East China, and served " does not need the comma
• "this role Liu" comma after "role"
• "In 1958 Liu" should be "In 1958, Liu"
• "or de facto top leader" should be "or the de facto top leader"
• "country, and" does not need the comma

All fixed. -Zanhe (talk) 18:37, 14 April 2016 (UTC)

Sources/verifiable

• All published books should have a location listed if possible.
• I would think reference 1, 2 and 8 should have an "accessdate" listed
• I will assume good faith on the Chinese language sources as my browser does not seem to be able to do the translations.

Locations added. Accessdate is not needed when the publication date is known, please see WP:REF. -Zanhe (talk) 18:38, 14 April 2016 (UTC)

Broad in coverage

• Yes I think so. Y

Neutral

• No issues Y

Stable

• Looks to be yes Y

Illustrated / Images

• File:Liu Geping.jpg - needs a "US Pubic Domain" tag

The image is PD-China, but not PD-US because of URAA. However, please see Commons:COM:DIU for discussion of URAA-affected PD files. -Zanhe (talk) 18:47, 14 April 2016 (UTC)

• @Zanhe: - That's the extent of my comments, it's not a long article so I do not have a ton of comments. I am putting the review on hold for seven days to allow the improvements to be made.  MPJ-US  21:59, 8 April 2016 (UTC)

• @Zanhe: no comments, no activities in the last six days. If nothing happens by tomorrow i will be forced to.closed this as failed and abandoned.  MPJ-US  17:07, 14 April 2016 (UTC)

@MPJ-DK: Thanks for the heads-up. Sorry I've been fully occupied by my DYK work lately. I'll respond to your comments in a day, or two at most. -Zanhe (talk) 17:13, 14 April 2016 (UTC)

@MPJ-DK: Thanks for your review. I've copyedited the article and I believe all your concerns have been addressed. -Zanhe (talk) 18:50, 14 April 2016 (UTC)

• @Zanhe: - Okay so the image tag is not an issue and the edits were all appropriate IMO. Passed, congratulations.  MPJ-US  20:34, 14 April 2016 (UTC)