I think the image should be cropped to only show her upper body – perhaps from right below her right elbow, so that doesn't get cut off. Otherwise, it's long, vertically.
"After a brief hiatus" is a pretty short paragraph, but not much can be done there I suppose
"Personal life" is made up of too many short paragraphs. I suggest merging a few, expanding a few, etc. until they aren't as small, stubby paragraphs. Please let me know when that is done then I can take another look at it.
