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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:40, 18 February 2022 (UTC)
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I will review this today --K. Peake 07:40, 18 February 2022 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
[edit]Pipe urban to Urban contemporary music in the infoboxRemove EMM from brackets since abbreviations of labels are not useful here, plus shouldn't Loudcom Media be the first label listed?Add "as a single" after the release date""Loti" was composed and" → "The song was composed and" plus this should be swapped with the release sentence for correct order"by Gjata, and produced as well as arranged by" → "by Gjata, while produced and arranged by" and remove the German producers introductionPipe urban to Urban contemporary music*"with its lyrics telling a tale of a woman, who losses" → "with the lyrics telling a tale of a woman, who loses" to avoid overusage of itThere's not enough reviews for a clear consensus, so write something like some critics or a few music critics to avoid bias""Loti" experienced success" → "The song experienced success""and further reached" → "while further reaching"
Background and composition
[edit]Remove "had previously" since this is the beginning of the section and also the only teaser mentionedThe announced and ultimate release date was 10 June 2021, so alter appropriatelyPipe urban to Urban contemporary music"who losses the intimacy" → "who loses the intimacy""yourself, would you?"." → "yourself, would you?"" per MOS:QUOTE on quotes ending with specified punctuation like this
Reception
[edit]Remove the overview part because there's not enough reviews to back it upBong Mines Entertainment should not be italicised"give a "traditional and "ethnic"" → "give a "traditional, ethnic""The chart-topping position is not mentioned by [12] unless my translator is faulty[13] shows a song previously charted in 2019, making this not her first hit in Switzerland"at number 47 and 61," → "at numbers 47 and 61,"
Music video
[edit]- Img looks good!
Remove for "Loti" after accompanying music video"alongside Albanian producer Borin Leka." → "alongside producer Borin Leka." because Albanian is the most recently used nationalityRemove generally praised by reviewer at the start of the sentence- The word "fancy" is not used in the source at all
- It's mentioned in the mid-lead of the article; in Albanian "lezetshëm" means chic, sweet or cute. Iaof2017 (talk) 12:46, 19 February 2022 (UTC)
Credits and personnel
[edit]- Good
Track listing
[edit]- Good
Charts
[edit]Weekly charts
[edit]See MOS:TABLECAPTION
Year-end charts
[edit]See MOS:TABLECAPTION
Release history
[edit]See MOS:TABLECAPTIONLabel → Label(s)
References
[edit]- Copyvio score looks solid at 18.0%!!!
Apple Music should only be wikilinked once for ref 3Cite Eurovistan as work/website instead on ref 7Cite Eurovision Union as work/website instead on ref 8WP:OVERLINK of Top Channel on refs 10 and 20WP:OVERLINK of Swiss Hitparade on ref 15Cite YouTube in the via parameter instead on ref 16Cite Albanian Post as work/website instead on ref 21
Final comments and verdict
[edit]On hold until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 10:16, 18 February 2022 (UTC)
- Hi @Kyle Peake:. Thank you for your review I solved your comments, but left a reply on a comment above. :) Iaof2017 (talk) 13:03, 19 February 2022 (UTC)
- Iaof2017 ✓ Pass now; I understand your point about fancy and did some quick copy editing myself! --K. Peake 10:21, 20 February 2022 (UTC)
- Thank youu. :D Iaof2017 (talk) 13:03, 20 February 2022 (UTC)
- Iaof2017 ✓ Pass now; I understand your point about fancy and did some quick copy editing myself! --K. Peake 10:21, 20 February 2022 (UTC)
- Hi @Kyle Peake:. Thank you for your review I solved your comments, but left a reply on a comment above. :) Iaof2017 (talk) 13:03, 19 February 2022 (UTC)