Talk:Love in This Club/GA1

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer:--CallMeNathanTalk2Me 21:04, 8 December 2010 (UTC)

Lead[edit]

  • Nice

Background[edit]

  • despite his marriage to stylist Tameka Foster in July 2007 -> women wouldn't like his music because he's married?
  • Well, he had become less popular since his marriage. Reworded a bit. Adabow (talk · contribs) 21:59, 8 December 2010 (UTC)

Composition[edit]

  • Fraser McAlpine of BBC Radio 1 says -> said, wrote

Release and critical reception[edit]

  • Nice

Chart performance[edit]

  • on the Billboard Hot 100 on the issue dated March 1, 2008 at number eighty-three -> reads better, "debuted at number eighty-three on the '"

Music Video[edit]

  • Is there a better photo? The description says they are "dancing intimately" but the photo only shows their faces. Not a big deal if you can't.
  • where he gave the song. -> sang, performed

Covers[edit]

Are there sources for these?

    • Overall there were almost no errors, good job! Once their fixed I'll gladly pass it :)--CallMeNathanTalk2Me 21:40, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
Passed :)--CallMeNathanTalk2Me 23:41, 8 December 2010 (UTC)