Talk:Luck and fate in Middle-earth/GA1
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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 05:24, 22 February 2023 (UTC)
Another Tolkien GAN! I will be able to review this later today. ツLunaEatsTuna (💬)— 05:24, 22 February 2023 (UTC)
- Many thanks! Chiswick Chap (talk) 05:51, 22 February 2023 (UTC)
- There we go! Okay, this review is on the shorter side, but the article is quite well-written, and a large portion of the text is attributed quotations which naturally cannot be changed. ツ LunaEatsTuna (💬)— 19:23, 22 February 2023 (UTC)
- LunaEatsTuna: Super. All done to date. Chiswick Chap (talk) 19:38, 22 February 2023 (UTC)
- Great work as always! I am now pleased to pass this article for GA status. Congrats! ツ LunaEatsTuna (💬)— 20:20, 22 February 2023 (UTC)
- LunaEatsTuna: Super. All done to date. Chiswick Chap (talk) 19:38, 22 February 2023 (UTC)
- There we go! Okay, this review is on the shorter side, but the article is quite well-written, and a large portion of the text is attributed quotations which naturally cannot be changed. ツ LunaEatsTuna (💬)— 19:23, 22 February 2023 (UTC)
Copyvio check
[edit]Earwig says good to go. The quotations are used appropriately in-line with WP:COPYQUOTE.
- Noted.
File
[edit]The image used is relevant, of acceptable quality and copyright-free:
File:Lippi Tobias and Archangel Raphael.jpg: valid public domain rationale.
- Noted.
Prose
[edit]- I would wikilink luck and fate in the lead as both are wikilinked later in the body.
- Done.
- "that the Valar resemble angels in Christianity" – wikilink to angels in Christianity; I reckon both angels and Christianity are commonly known enough definitions to not require a wikilink.
- Actually there is a more specific article "Angels in Christianity" which does rather seem worth linking.
- In the table, "Tries to command the Ring to return to him" is capitalised whilst none of the other sentences are.
- Fixed.
- "In addition, the leapfrogging of the timeline" – is leapfrogging the correct word? From what I could find it appears to be predominantly economics jargon.
- It's quite usual in Britspeak.
- Oh I see.
- It's quite usual in Britspeak.
- "Théoden's maxim just mentioned" – how about just "Théoden's maxim"? IMO the additional text is unnecessary.
- Gone.
- Add citations to the quote boxes.
- Done.
Refs
[edit]Passes spotcheck on refs 1, 7, 12 and 16.
- Noted.
- Kreeft, Peter J. is a dead link.
- Archived. Their whole website is down, probably just a glitch - it's been there since 2005.
- I hope they get it working again.
- Archived. Their whole website is down, probably just a glitch - it's been there since 2005.
Other
[edit]Short desc, section formatting, ALT text, navs, other templates and cats all good. Nice work!
- Noted.
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