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(rush into room in best Eric Morecambe impression)....right then, let's go. I will place some notes here and will do some straightforward copyediting as I go. Feel free to revert any change which inadvertently alters the meaning. Casliber (talk · contribs) 13:24, 3 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]

  • The lead is a little slim, and could do with another important fact or two.  Done Cliftoniantalk
  • Luton Town's most recent spell as a major club began... - "Luton Town's most recent successful spell began..." (the club didn't change per se)  Done Cliftoniantalk
  • but the conversion of the Kenilworth Stand to an all-seater wasn't fully completed in 2005 --> "until 2005"?  Done Cliftoniantalk
  • There is also an animosity - I'd remove the 'an' which looks funny.  Done Cliftoniantalk
  • For aesthetics you could combine a few stubby paras.  Done
  • Any idea who was behind the funny colour changes? Also, any other celebrity supporters apart from Morecambe?
I would assume it was the club's board. On the celebrity fans front, I'm not sure they are relevant to the article. Cliftoniantalk 14:50, 3 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Nearly there, prose is a little choppy and I had a bit of a run through - I can let it slip for GA but would need some polish for FAC. Casliber (talk · contribs) 14:31, 3 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Ok, done and dusted :) Casliber (talk · contribs) 06:16, 4 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]