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GA Review

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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk2me) 17:17, 4 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]


GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it well written?
    A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
    B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
  2. Is it verifiable with no original research, as shown by a source spot-check?
    A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
    B. Reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
    C. It contains no original research:
    D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
    B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):
  4. Is it neutral?
    It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
  5. Is it stable?
    It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
  6. Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
    A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:
    B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:


Infobox
  • No source in article to support where and when the song was recorded
Lead
  • ...the song has so far peaked at... – This wording may not be relevant as time goes on
     Done Calvin NaNaNaC'mon!
Background, release and composition
  • No issues
Critical reception
  • Recommendation: I would put composition into critical reception, OR put the audio sample in the above section
     Done Calvin NaNaNaC'mon!
  • No other issues
Chart performance
Music video
  • ...who worked with Rihanna for most of her music videos. – Give some examples of other videos he worked with Rihanna on, so this information is verifiable
     Done Calvin NaNaNaC'mon!
  • ...Rihanna for "cold, calculated execution of murder" in the video... – Add period at end
     Not done What is a period in British English? Calvin NaNaNaC'mon!
It ends a sentence. Right now, it shows "criticized Rihanna for "cold, calculated execution of murder" in the video, The council disagreed...". There should be a period (.) at the end of "video" because "The council disagreed" is a seperate sentence. - Rp0211 (talk2me) 17:03, 5 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Oh, a full stop.  Done Calvin NaNaNaC'mon!
Credits and personnel
  • No issues
Charts
  • No issues
Radio and release history
  • No issues
References
Based on my review, I believe there aren't any other issues. If you do see issues though, please tell me. I am human, and I do make mistakes occasionally. - Rp0211 (talk2me) 17:03, 5 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
okay, i just added some work, publisher and accessdates to a few. Calvin NaNaNaC'mon!

Overall review

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After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put this article on hold at this time. There are a few minor issues above which are affecting the prose quality of the article. Other than that, the only major problem I see is the formatting of sources in the "References" section. I will give you the general seven days to address these issues and/or debate the issues you believe do not affect GA status until a consensus on all issues is reached. When you have addressed an issue, please use the {{done}} template to indicate which issues you have fixed. If you need help or have any questions, please feel free to ask. - Rp0211 (talk2me) 18:50, 4 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Okay thanks, I will do this later today. It's 2:50am!Calvin NaNaNaC'mon! 01:49, 5 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Have done most things, just two questions above. Calvin NaNaNaC'mon! 14:46, 5 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Everything is done now. Calvin NaNaNaC'mon! 17:29, 5 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Since all issues have been addressed, I feel confident passing this article. I would recommend using the {{Singlechart}} template to help organize the international chart positions. For a resource, see: Template:Singlechart#Support. Congratulations and keep up the good work! - Rp0211 (talk2me) 17:46, 5 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks! I will do yours tomorrow, I promise! Calvin NaNaNaC'mon! 18:09, 5 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]