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Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin (talk · contribs) 13:14, 3 December 2011 (UTC)
Will review it in the following days
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- Lead is definetely too short; at the moment it is more a discography than a biography lead. Add personal life, their style, their awards, their career. The lead should summarize the whole content.
- Added some more, although I don't see how the existing lead was any worse than the one in, say, Clay Walker or Joe Diffie.
- Much better. Prose is also nice.
- Added some more, although I don't see how the existing lead was any worse than the one in, say, Clay Walker or Joe Diffie.
- Lead is definetely too short; at the moment it is more a discography than a biography lead. Add personal life, their style, their awards, their career. The lead should summarize the whole content.
- a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- The location is not known?
- Added.
- The location is not known?
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
- ISBN/ISSN check: one dead
- Dabsolver check: ok
- Checklinks check: two dead links
- Reflinks check: ok
- Addressed a couple issues. Ten Pound Hammer • (What did I screw up now?) 15:53, 3 December 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks, I will now pass! ;)