Talk:Motorola W233
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Editorializing?[edit]
I own a Renew W233, and I like it just fine. (Although it appears to be dying now, after 4 years of use.) But I was surprised by the tone I found when I read this article.
Is this a Wikipedia entry, or an editorial or a product review? If it is merely the former, should it really be using words like "exciting" or "impressive" to describe the product it discusses?
It uses both these words in the "Features" section. The fact that the full phrases used are "much less exciting" and "only impressive aspect" doesn't change the fact that these are words of judgment or opinion.
I was as impressed as I was surprised to find that the "much less exciting" claim is actually supported by a footnote! However, this footnote simply provides an expired link to an announcement/review — on a no-longer-active site — that used to call the Renew 233 "the least exciting phone ever." And it's still editorial language.
2001:5B0:24FF:3CF0:0:0:0:32 (talk) 04:42, 6 December 2013 (UTC)
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