Talk:My Boy (Billie Eilish song)/GA1
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Reviewer: LOVI33 (talk · contribs) 20:52, 26 July 2020 (UTC)
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Because of your work on "Hotter than Hell", I will be taking this on. I'll try to get to it soon. LOVI33 20:52, 26 July 2020 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
[edit]- "a song recorded by American" → "a song by American"
- "debut studio EP" → "debut extended play (EP)"
- The SWMRS cover doesn't seem notable for the lead, remove it
- "It has been certified by several" → ""My Boy" has been awarded several"
- "most notably" → "including a"
Background and composition
[edit]- Target single to Single (music)
- Target EP to extended play
- "According to sheet music published at Musicnotes.com" → "According to sheet music published by Universal Music Publishing Group at Musicnotes.com", with target
- "F#3 to B4" ← "F♯3 to B4", using Template:music
Reception
[edit]- Remove "Upon its release,"
- "and felt its chorus" → "and felt it's chorus"
- Remove "most notably"
Live performances and other usages
[edit]- Change title to "Promotion and other usages"
Track listing
[edit]- Looks good!
Credits and personnel
[edit]- Change title to 'Personnel', 'Credits and personnel' is usually used if recording locations are also involved
- target liner notes to itself
Charts
[edit]- MOS:TABLECAPTION probably: Chart position for "My Boy"
- Which year did it peak in? Change to Chart (Year peaked)
Certifications
[edit]- MOS:TABLECAPTION probably: Certifications and sales for "My Boy"
- Fix bottom so sales+streaming figures are shown
Release history
[edit]- MOS:TABLECAPTION probably: Release dates and formats for "My Boy"
- "Country" → "Region"
- "Format" → "Format(s)"
References
[edit]- Make sure all these are archived using the tool
- copyvio score looks good at 18.0%
- A better source is needed for ref 1, a source to an EP that is unarchived doesn't confirm it's release
- Target Don't Smile at Me to itself in ref 2
- Target Billboard to Billboard (magazine) in ref 7
Final comments and verdict
[edit]On hold for now. Once issues are fixed I will pass it. LOVI33 18:38, 27 July 2020 (UTC)
LOVI33 I have addressed all the issues. The Ultimate Boss (talk) 19:45, 27 July 2020 (UTC)
- Great!, thats a ✓ Pass. LOVI33 01:57, 28 July 2020 (UTC)