Talk:Nasodigitoacoustic syndrome/GA1
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Reviewer: Regards, MacMedtalkstalk 02:46, 20 April 2011 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
I will get started on this in depth tomorrow. Regards, MacMedtalkstalk 02:46, 20 April 2011 (UTC)
Looks pretty good so far, no major issues. Now combing for image problems or issues with MoS compliance. Regards, MacMedtalkstalk 22:35, 20 April 2011 (UTC)
On hold for now. Regards, MacMedtalkstalk 22:59, 20 April 2011 (UTC)
Comments[edit]
- No period at the end of the X-chromosome caption. Doesn't form a complete sentence.
Done
- The reference "Hereditary hearing loss and its symptoms" needs an accessdate.
Done
- The {{Main}} in "Cause and Genetics" needs to be at the top.
Done
- "Cited Literature" should be renamed to "Works or Publications" and moved above the references section.
Done
- The "et. al" and the dates when you refer to studies need to go. That information is available in the references and just clutters up the article.
Done
Regards, MacMedtalkstalk 22:59, 20 April 2011 (UTC)
Image[edit]
Is there an image available of the finger changes? Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 03:55, 1 September 2011 (UTC)