Talk:Neurologic music therapy

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Mobile Music Touch should be deleted. It is a small project with only limited scope within this field. Perhaps the authors have taken liberties here. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2601:C1:5:48B0:E101:795B:2A06:3791 (talk) 00:15, 21 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for your work on this subject
Please link music therapy in the lead and body of the article, and remove the see also section as it is unnecessary at this point thanks
More to come Biosthmors (talk) 21:01, 26 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Don't ask questions in the article. More to come. Biosthmors (talk) 21:45, 26 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
The fifth and sixth words "defined as" are unnecessary. Biosthmors (talk) 05:18, 27 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Neurologic music therapy (NMT) is repeated twice in the lead, that's unnecessary. Just abbreviate once.
The first three sentences are odd. They all sound kinda like alternate definitions. Can we just get one sentence out of those three?
The article states it is "research based". I'm not sure what that means. Evidence-based medicine has a specific definition. Might there be a Cochrane Collaboration review on the subject?
Why is http://www.colostate.edu/dept/cbrm/academymissionstatement.html a reliable source for statements about music therapy? It's not third-party, in my opinion, see Wikipedia:Rs#Overview
Per WP:HEADINGS there is no need to capitalize section headings.
Can you link to Brodmann's area? WP:Red links are OK too. They help build the encyclopedia. Biosthmors (talk) 05:28, 27 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]
If the "Neurologic music therapy" page re-directed to the "Music Therapy" page, a merge would make logical sense. It is, after all, only one of many forms of music therapy. The article does not appear so dense as to merit a whole page of its own. — Preceding unsigned comment added by StartingRightNow (talk • contribs) 06:31, 1 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]