Talk:Night of Your Life (David Guetta song)/GA1
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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 01:21, 3 December 2011 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Lead
[edit]Resolved comments
- disc jockey (DJ)-music producer → DJ and producer
- additional vocals from → guest vocals by
- former's → Guetta's
- . Production for the song was also handled by Guetta and Tuinfort. → , whilst production of the song was helmed by Guetta and Tuinfort.
- Music critics → Link
- generally positively → Poor phrasing, use only positively
Section Done. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 22:52, 3 December 2011 (UTC)
Background
[edit]Resolved comments
- , whilst production of the song was helmed by Guetta and Tuinfort. → Use the same as what I have suggest for consistency.
- Guetta revealed that he did not know Jennifer Hudson that well and commented: → Guetta revealed that he did not know Hudson before collaborating on the song, saying,
- Several long quotes, can the longer ones be paraphrased.
- "Night of Your Life" was released for digital download on August 22, 2011, as the third and final promotional single from the album, as part of the iTunes Store's countdown to the album's release.[3][4] → Why is this a solo sentence, include as part of the paragraph.
Section Done. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 22:52, 3 December 2011 (UTC)
Composition
[edit]Resolved comments
- Again, this is made up entirely of quotes. At least two need to be paraphrased.
- The audio file caption, could you not make it a bit more informational and interesting? What is it about the chorus?
Section Done. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 22:53, 3 December 2011 (UTC)
Critical reception
[edit]Resolved comments
- Again, lots of quotes. Try to paraphrase some.
- Link "Repeat"
Chart performance
[edit]Resolved comments
- Considering the amount of charts the song charted on, this section is quite small. This could be such a good section. Look here for example, it's so easy to see the countries it chart in and the songs charting history.
References
[edit]Resolved comments
Are actually pretty good!
- All of the ...charts.com references should, for example, have the work parameter as norwegiancharts.com, not VG-Lista.
- I used the chart templates so the references are automatically shown like that. Oz talk 02:34, 4 December 2011 (UTC)
- FN6 and FN30 have double full stops (..) in the publisher, remove them, so only one automatically appears
Done Oz talk 02:34, 4 December 2011 (UTC)
Overall
[edit]This is a great little article! Not much to sort out, on hold. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 02:18, 3 December 2011 (UTC)
- Passed! This is a great little article. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 02:47, 4 December 2011 (UTC)
- Thank you! :) Oz talk 05:30, 4 December 2011 (UTC)