Talk:Nové Zámky 16th electoral district (Czechoslovakia)

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Hello, I wanted to give some feedback on this article:

Table - Have you considered putting this under a lead section, usually tables go under a paragraph or two of text just to make it look a bit nicer.
I don't think this sentence should start this section: "The boundaries of the Nové Zámky 16th electoral district and the Kosice 20th electoral district had been drawn to maximize the number of Hungarian and German voters in these districts." - Maybe move it around so that is the second paragraph. I also think you need another (official) source to prove this was a purposeful action to link these election districts - otherwise it should be clear it is speculation. Also, what date was this decision made?
"The Košice 20th electoral district had 57,238 inhabitants per seat." - Is this relevant to the Nové Zámky 16th electoral district article?
There are only election details for 1920 & 1929, is there a reason for this?

Thanks, ツStacey (talk) 10:39, 26 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]