Talk:Now I'm That Bitch/GA1
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Reviewer: Status (talk · contribs) 19:29, 8 June 2013 (UTC)
- 3 uncategorized redirects and 1 connection issue
- The June 19th release date does not appear to be sourced.
- Nor is the 2008 recording year.
- Critical response is relying too much on quotes, some can be put into your own words.
- "On the dated week of September 14, 2009" → "On the week of September 14, 2009"
- "on the dated week of July 11, 2009" → "on the week of July 11, 2009"
- Music video section needs to be more detailed. The intro does not consist of Pitbull just rapping (he's barely even see in the beginning). "Franc being joined by two girls dancing" doesn't happen until the end of the video.
Result
[edit]- It's been more than seven days with no progress. Failing. — Statυs (talk, contribs) 22:18, 19 June 2013 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.